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Tight Writing Vs Flabby Writing
Consider the following two versions of a text the conclusion of a short story written for a training course. The…
Length of sentence- Changing with the Times
Here are extracts from two editorial articles in The Times of London. They appeared on the same day – 82…
Jigsaw Paragraph Puzzle
Rearrange the following seven sentences into the well-structured paragraph they originally formed. (Just to establish the context: in the book…
Transitions in Broadcasting – The Continuity Announcement
Here is a clever transition or ‘bridge’ between two items on a weekly magazine programme on the radio. Following an…
Arresting Openings
Here are a few captivating opening paragraphs or sentences from various novels. Non-fiction too reads all the better for an…
An Unacceptably Long Sentence
Consider the following overloaded sentence from a newspaper. Professional journalists, no matter how hurried, really should do better than this:…
Effective Repetition
Repeating a word or phrase can have positive advantages, alongside the negative virtue of averting confusion. It can serve to…